Really cool, great aesthetic! The only thing is, I’d remove the medallion on the left collarbone; it looks like a stunted limb, which gives it a satirical vibe. 🖤 🖤 🖤

I like this vermicelli! 👍

Now you have two cuties. A good result.!)

Absolutely — thank you so much for taking the time to read both episodes and share such thoughtful feedback! It genuinely means a lot to me. I’m especially glad to hear that the worldbuilding is interesting to you, because I was honestly worried that the lore might feel too dense and overwhelming. Knowing that it’s making you want to learn more about the world and its characters is incredibly encouraging.

And yes, you were absolutely right about that missing word. 😄 It turns out the word simply didn’t fit in the text box during editing, and I somehow failed to notice it.

Drumroll… 🥁 - OPERATIONS!

with their appearance taken for himself through alchemical operations.

Thank you again for catching it and for reading INFITRUS! It really means a lot. 🙏

Thank you so much! Here’s the general link — read it on whichever platform is most convenient for you.

https://lnk.bio/23off_Sugar

!That’s cool—her look reminded me of Senua’s. (Hellblade)

Thanks! Links to all the resources are in the comments. Overall, there isn’t much there yet—just the first introductory chapter so far.

😭 😭 😭 I am very grateful to you—this means a lot to me! Don’t worry, I’ll carry the story through to the key events, no matter what.!)

https://lnk.bio/23off_Sugar

Thanks! That’s cool. It’s good to get a different perspective; I was in a rush to release the first chapter, so I didn’t really look into cover designs and styles. )

Thank you so much!!

Knowing that someone likes it gives me the strength to keep moving forward and finish this story.

There is still a lot of work ahead. The world has a huge amount of lore that needs to be revealed.

I stopped drawing back in school—I don’t even know why… And now, at 34, I’ve decided to make my dream come true. AHah, maybe it’s a midlife crisis. )))))

Thank you! ❤️

Thanks a lot! 🙇

https://lnk.bio/23off_Sugar

This is a project just starting out—everything is free.))

I’m truly grateful for your attention and support!!

No, it will remain black and white.

Creating one chapter already takes about a month, so I simply don’t have enough time to color it as well. 😵